Friday, November 24, 2017

The Night Zoo

The Night Zoo
Tom Rivers  has very  floppy here and  he  has two gold elephant on one  on his shoulder  and another on  his hat. Tom has blue shorts  with white strings in them  and he has a blue coat and that has the gold elephant on it. He has a red  tie and  a blue taupe  tom has a teleporting torch  he has a lot of freckles. Tom is 12 years old and he lives in the night zoo.  He love animals and dislikes spiders ,boley's and vegeta”?.;>ompassionate because he savd  the pengiun.

Tom gos out in the night  and advec is all thro the night and he has a giraffe coold sam he  can turn invisible and he like playing hide and seek Sam dislikes  standing still!!!!.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Dominic,

    My name is Emiely (pronounced "Emily") and I am a blogger at the Summer Learning Journey. I was reading this piece of writing, 'The Night Zoo' and wow!! What a cool story! You described Tom very well. I would love to meet Sam the giraffe, but I wonder if he would be invisible or not if I got to meet him?

    I know it's a bit tricky to start, but if you wanted to continue blogging over the summer holidays remember to head over to the activities page on the Summer Learning Journey website. You can do these activities in any order. Be sure to remember to post your answers onto your blog.

    Summer Learning Journey activities link:

    I hope to be blogging with you this summer!

    Noho ora mai,
    Emiely :)


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